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WIP--G1 Prime by JediKaputski WIP--G1 Prime by JediKaputski
The WIP mostly just refers to the background. I'm looking for some input as to what can be changed/fixed/added/subtracted.

Thanks in advance!

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Transformers and Optimus Prime copyright TakaraTomy/Hasbro
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emceealphawolf Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2009
AWESOME!!!!
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JoeHoganArt Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
This is GREAT!

Some Points of interest...
*Great linework! Did you ink it in Photoshop or Illustrator?
*Primary lighting is great! I love the choices you made for where the lights and shadows fall.
*FANTASTIC technical drawing! You've come a long way since I started watching you! I'm proud to be on DA with you! ;)

Some criticism...
*I agree with molliecool, it's a bit dark...Maybe lighten the shadows a little bit?
*The perspective seems a little wonky with that background....It looks like a downshot of Prime, and the background looks like the horizon line is way too low if that were the case...And the background itself, while a good color contrast for prime, is a bit weak..
*I kinda wish the glowing ax things (I'm not too familiar with them) were a bit brighter as a light source since they're glowing so brightly with shading that dark...

Amazing work regardless!
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JediKaputski Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
Photoshop. I take the standard brush and just drop the angle to 50% or something. I then use the pen tool to outline, making sure to select Use Brush Pressure. And then magic happens!

Yeah, those shadows keep changing from screen to screen, so it'll get fixed soon.

The background is still under work, but i will definitely raise the horizon line.

And as for the axes, I'll add more highlights soon :D

Thanks a lot for the help man! I really appreciate it! I'm glad someone helped me out :D
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JoeHoganArt Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
Awesome! Happy to help, my friend!

Looking forward to the finished product!
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molliecool Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
its super dark on my screen, buuuutttt... i love it :D
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JediKaputski Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2009
:D
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